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See You When the Rain Stops

I've got my eye on you... "Don't fear my darkness" For my mood reflects by the moon or sun, and my mysterious faces and silhouettes... can be creepingly pleasant If that's such a thing? Sometimes I will be watching you from behind Though, other times I will be leading you to your fate or destinations My darkness can sometimes blind you, So, look for me when the sun shines... that is when I am at my best But beware, in a ghostly manner, within seconds... I will disappear into the unknown I am always full of fresh air, but, my breath has been taken Well, I will see you sometime soon, time to go... It's raining

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/20/2023 6:58:00 AM

This fine poems makes one think. Great title and verses my good friend. A definitive fav for me. God bless you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 3:50:00 AM

I will always admire you for the way you write your poems. Always so enigmatic. I like it that way. It makes you think.

Charles Messina
Date: 9/19/2023 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate your kind words. I pray you are feeling better my good friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/18/2023 7:45:00 AM

Shadow? That's my guess. This reminds me a bit of the Police song "Every breath you take." Has a menacing, stalker feel to it, though possibly benign. Interesting read Charles

Charles Messina
Date: 9/18/2023 8:55:00 AM

You nailed it, Tom. "Shadow" Great song by the "Police" you're right it does have that feel now that I look at it from that perspective. Thanks for commenting...i wrote it for a contest. I hope the sponsor gets the message (lol)