See Through Me--Eden Ryan Visual 1, 25 Words

I fear if someone looks hard
They'll see I'm broken..

My mask will fall off, my eyes will expose
My past, my heart--things unspoken..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 15, 2015 at 1:48 AM
Eden, wow... deep
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June 15, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Thank you! I entered it in a contest! That's why it has the odd title...hopefully I place since it's my first!
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