See Levels Rise

stoked by fires above...

   looses glacier melt below...

      ocean's primal roar
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Krutsinger Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:52 PM
The fires above has me asking "is that the sun?"
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:01 PM
I certainly hope so! (i.e., that it's 'the sun'). For if not, then what?... :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:33 PM
Clever, Gershon. I like your use of SEE vs SEA in your title.
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:59 PM
Now you see it; now you - - - - - - - (don't). ~ At sea in Chicago, although not always on the level ... ~ Gershon
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