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See her See me in Artistry A portrait reveals one’s secrets age-old Eyes tell a story without being told.Quote - poets own. I look into her eyes and find myself Feel all the hurts that I have ever felt A grown woman and beauteous she is Her refinement captured by the artist. A little wry smile, a glint in her eyes What observer could not be mesmerised Sitting elegantly, posture demure With the charm of mysterious allure. I recall myself when I was a child Unable to run free, forlorn, fragile Time passes, we progress and learn to love Counting our many blessings from above. A magnificent creation of art Captivating viewers hearts from the start Sung and written of often down the years Reducing many to weep silent tears. Mona Lisa, I am her, she is me Painting by Leonardo da Vinci. 9th November 2021 Become a Painting Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/11/2023 3:05:00 AM

Lovely x

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/11/2023 4:31:00 AM

Thank you x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2021 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Love your great ending. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/30/2021 8:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Paula. Blessings, Belle

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/25/2021 3:55:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me thank the Lord for enabling you to inspire others through your writing talent. God bless you.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2021 5:09:00 AM

So nice of you Beata especially as it’s Thanksgiving Day today… Thank you, Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 11/23/2021 6:51:00 AM

What a wonderful interpretation of the contest theme you certainly put yourself in the picutre, The painting certainly is alluring but smaller than I expected, hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2021 5:07:00 AM

Thank you Jan :-) Hugs, Belle xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/22/2021 12:02:00 PM

It is so easy to superimpose ourselves in her smile, all we need is to remember when we first smiled from the heart, nice penmanship dear poet, congrats

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/22/2021 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Mystic Rose, smiles say so much whether one’s happy or sad, a smile can light up a room or speak of one’s sorrow and gloom… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/22/2021 8:34:00 AM

Great Imagination and wonderful painting. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/22/2021 8:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Christuraj…. Belle

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/17/2021 10:05:00 PM

Hello Belle ... Mona Lisa has inspired many to write after witnessing her portrait. She is a magnificent inspiration - another fine verse Belle - Lindsay

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/22/2021 8:52:00 AM

Hi Lindsay, the Mona Lisa portrait is certainly inspirational, who knows what her eyes portray, or her thoughts as she posed that way. Thank you… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/12/2021 5:27:00 AM

So well penned dear friend, there is definite story she wishes to express in those piercing beautiful eyes your entry to this contest is very clever and I foresee a win here, best of luck Belle, not that you need it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 7:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer dear friend, I see something in Mona Lisa’s eyes that tells a story, whatever the story is will always be a mystery. Blessings and hugs sent back you you… Belle

Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/12/2021 4:39:00 AM

Till now, whatever have seen about aesthetic sentimental depiction of an art, this one will stand as a timeless classic! Not to hyperbole, it's sublime! Hats off! Hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 7:14:00 PM

Thank you Silpika, a delightful review and a new word on me too, had to look up hyperbole and now understand the meaning. Hugs, Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2021 3:38:00 PM

Excellent writing, twisted in a novel manner and ideally suited to the contest theme. Belle, you have persuaded me that you really are the artwork.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 7:01:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, the painting of Mona Lisa brings back memories from my childhood past, though she’s a grown woman It’s the hurt I see in her eyes that bring hurtful sorrows back, I’m not her but I see me in the picture. Thank you… Belle

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/10/2021 10:08:00 AM

Aw, just awesome Belle...I just loved your take in the contest apt for the theme...you rose well for the challenge..."You are Mona Lisa"....well done...Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 6:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Anitha, truly appreciated… Belle

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2021 8:03:00 AM

Beautifully done. An original! God bless you. Love, Gina

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/10/2021 9:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina. God bless you too… Belle

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2021 5:54:00 AM

Phenomenal write, spun creatively--very apt for the contest theme. You convinced me, Belle, you are the painting.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/10/2021 6:07:00 AM

Ha I wish, the only resemblance is in the emotion of the portrait, but let’s pretend. Thank you Vijay very much… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/9/2021 8:14:00 PM

Mona Lisa and George Washington -- always felt their smiles were similar. Poor George, though. Only worth a buck. lol... btw, Have you ever heard/seen Nat King Cole sing 'Mona Lisa?' There's a video of him crooning the song, wearing a 'baby-blue' suit. I highly recommend it if you've never seen it. It's about 2 minutes, is all. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2021 8:26:00 PM

I have heard Mona Lisa sung by Nat King Cole, love it and listen to it over and over again, saw him in his baby-blue suit too. Thank you Gershon, happiness and joy in return… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/9/2021 12:05:00 PM

Who said Leonardo is not versatile? You make a great Mona Lisa.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2021 3:39:00 PM

Ah, thank you so much Victor, your words truly mean a lot. Hugs and blessings… Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/9/2021 10:43:00 AM

Enjoyed, but must admit to being very disappointed when I saw Mona Lisa, as there were many paintings in the Louvre, I thought were better, including one of a woman praying before candles in a church. I called a guard because I thought water had dripped onto the canvas, but was assured it was a painted tear . . . ..

Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/10/2021 6:03:00 PM

Not at all disappointed in your write, just the painting did not meet my expectations! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2021 11:06:00 AM

Rico, I’m pleased you enjoyed the read, but sorry you were disappointed that I chose to write about the Mona Lisa painting. That must have been a convincing tear on the painting you mentioned, your concern would have been appreciated I’m sure. Thank you… Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/9/2021 8:40:00 AM

You rose well to the challenge Belle, great interpretation of the contest theme. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Having good days of the week so far, hope it’s the same for you too… Belle