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Seduction

Dear Mr. Ink Why don't you move in with me? And show me the new words I yet have to see? Let's uncover the deep hidden meanings together and roll around on the sheets of my imagination's gloomy weather. I can't promise you faithfulness, but neither can you. But if all the rumours I've heard are true, that an artist should be melancholic and blue, and quite depressed and emotional too. Then perhaps we could consider a temporary ; I do? © Gry W Christensen

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Date: 9/27/2014 2:36:00 PM
What a clevery write this is, Gry! Excellent piece that I truly enjoyed reading! Pandita
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Gry Christensen
Date: 9/27/2014 4:25:00 PM
Hi Pandita, thanks so much for your kind words. I had so much fun writing this one, that I almost wrote a sequel.
Date: 9/20/2014 9:06:00 AM
beautiful...
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Gry Christensen
Date: 9/20/2014 9:27:00 AM
Hi Lori ! Thank you so much, I appreciate you reading it and dropping me a comment.
Date: 7/24/2014 12:24:00 AM
Love it ... It's so fresh and true. Thank you and God bless you.
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Gry Christensen
Date: 7/24/2014 11:37:00 PM
Hi Regina, thank you so much for reading this too and leaving me a comment. I'm so happy and grateful. Many blessings and good wishes to you! :)
Date: 7/20/2014 4:07:00 PM
Nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Gry Christensen
Date: 7/20/2014 4:53:00 PM
Hi Debbie, thank you for reading and thank you for letting me know you did. Much appreciated!
Date: 7/20/2014 1:38:00 PM
waow ... loved it the way depicted ..awesome
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Gry Christensen
Date: 7/20/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Hina! :)
Date: 7/20/2014 1:05:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup! A very good piece. Writing about writing... can be very interesting in it's reflective way...
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Gry Christensen
Date: 7/20/2014 4:05:00 PM
Hello Carol, Thank you for reading and your nice feedback. Much appreciated!
Date: 7/19/2014 6:44:00 PM
ooh I sense a marriage of convenience LOL fabulous write. Hugs Jan
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Gry Christensen
Date: 7/19/2014 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Sometimes one have to try everything......... :) Even dark humour...

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