Seduction

The soft, moist, pink flesh of her lips quivered, as he came inside her room ~ By: Joseph May

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Rollo West

Date: 12/2/2012 10:50:00 AM

Great write on this Joseph, nice imagery. Rollo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:06:00 PM

JosephStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/15/2012 2:23:00 PM

congratulations Joseph ...Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 11/15/2012 12:45:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win friend, Joseph! love/hugs, LG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:19:00 PM

CONGRATS JOSEPH ON A SEXY HAIKU WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 4:52:00 PM

Big congrats on this one. I sure do remember it!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 1:51:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2012 11:57:00 AM

Discreet work..Congrats on your wonderful win..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 5:55:00 AM

Love this Joseph.Congratulations on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:32:00 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)