Sedoka Love

I wrote love letters,
Because eventually
My mind caught up with my heart.
My heart filled with love,
When you ran across my mind,
Thus infiltrating my thoughts.

I thought about you,
When I first saw you again;
Reintroduced to beauty.
I, first, saw you there,
Back when time often stood still,
So you could be recorded.

Then, I saw you here,
And, in the blink of an eye,
You transformed right before me.
I saw you changing,
But, when my eye blinked again,
The transformation was done.

I picked up my pen,
So that I could remember
The one I fell in love with,
And kept on loving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 14, 2010 at 8:41 PM
Hi! Doc,"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. Sweet with happy spirited emotions to go through amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, (loving *loving* loving )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.
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October 13, 2010 at 9:29 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this beautiful morning Doc. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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October 12, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Interesting work..Different presentation of the idea of love..Sara
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October 12, 2010 at 2:01 PM
very creative, thought provoking write on the faith of love and its passionate feelings, dakarai
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