Earl Mitchell Poet Sedoka

Sedoka Contest

So my aunts dying - 
    a dispassionate aside
        over coffee, Saturday
No point in crying
    bitter death taken in stride
        and a sugary frappe

How fit the topic?
     Heated chemicals imbibe
        Caffeinating hollow sounds 
Reflect myopic
     Her death we fein to describe
         with muffins and coffee grounds

Saturday, January 16th 2016

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Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2016 at 9:16 PM Earl, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2016 at 11:12 AM Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara

Teddy Kimathi January 19, 2016 at 6:54 AM A very rich literary piece Earl! Congrats for your placement in the contest!!!! ;-)

Beautiful Scars January 18, 2016 at 11:26 AM Earl, many thanks for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 10:52 AM EARL, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 7:01 AM Wishing you the best, Earl.... Skat