Sedoka 1

should i e'er let go
would i care to reach out again
would i dare to reach out again

should i e'er let go
could i care to reach out again
could i dare to reach out again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 4, 2012 at 3:47 AM
Chuck, I never tried this form...I've tried so many times to change my form and ways... and I am sure..you can reach for it all...thank you..always for your comment on my teddy bear poem... It was over something disturbing I heard and read... Always..pd
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