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Ink''s Secrets of the Soul Contest ~ 7/1/26

Secrets Kept Within My Soul

I dwell in what seems like a hopeless hell, 
filled with frustration I cannot abide.
Often feeling as if I'm serving a sentence of solitude
   brooding over the want of you.
Angst crashes over me as waves in a storm tide
as I continue to hide secrets in my soul
   that have me stumbling in the shallows of a shoal.

Sullenly, I sulk like a mourning dove
 whose blood spills from being unloved,
   dying with a secret yet untold.
If only I had the courage to be bold
 I would speak the words long held in my heart
   of love and longing for you, I dared not impart.

Sonnets... I've inked at least a tome or two
about romantic notions I've always had of you,
 but most lie crumpled in the trash,
  until I burned those verses in the ash
   for I fear if my secrets would ever unfold
    you would take flight, leaving my heart cold.

Tormented and troubled, I cry in shadowed night
feeling you will never see me in love's light...
crazed from the yearning need of you
   as if I am the asylum of your aches.
My wounded heart would surely break
   if I taste your truth of being spurned
    never having a kiss from your lips
     or the tender touch of your fingertips.

I would wish for beauty to catch your eye
  or angel's wings so that I may fly
across your view in a silver moonlit sky,
collecting prisms of stardust, so rare
that you would see me as someone to love...
  one you would welcome with all of your heart
   and from my side, you would never want to part.

If wishes could only make it so...
 I would ask for a paradise
  where happiness is found on every plateau.
An elysian garden, where orchids grow
  and your eyes follow me wherever I go.
There, I would feel your heartbeat with mine
 and find that I'm trapped in your pulse,
  forever a part of each other
   in a world so gloriously divine.

If my wish would be granted true
I would hear you whisper, "I love only you."
To Andromeda I would serenade, even in sleep
  for no longer would I have reason to weep 
    and never another soulful secret to keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kitchin Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Lin, congratulations on your first place win with your beautifully penned sad and heartfelt romantic poem.
Lane Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 1:50 PM
Thanks so very much for reading this one and for leaving your kind thoughts.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Secrets Kept Within My Soul" write. Great Picture Here.... A wonderful ending. Words have power. You know just how to use them. Have a blessed day with your win, Paula...........
Lane Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 1:49 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and the painting. Thanks, Paula.
Empress Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 10:55 AM
Dear Linnersz, Ofcourse I should have known this poem was written by you! I didnt know when I was judging and I was like wow, what a brilliant take! And it got even better as I read on! Your way with words and how you express shows that you dont just scribble some words but they weigh so heavy but phrased in such an elegant manner, so many layers of emotions! And I feel them, everytime! Which is why I must fave this and congratulate you on your top win! Thank you for writing! Sending you light
Lane Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 1:49 PM
Thank you for a winning spot on your list, Ink. I always appreciate your emotional themes and your detailed reviews.
Gibbons Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:19 PM
Wow Lin awesomely deep, flowing from your heart and soul. So tender, so sad, dreams come true never quit believing in depth of love in your heart and soul. It just flew like a gentle dove in flight. Have you ever painted this I saw it like a beautiful canvas. Sorry if going to deep but your inspiration I get from your creations is mind blowing. Never change. You are enough my friend hugs <3
Lane Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 5:25 AM
I’m truly honored by your compliments, Dorothy. I often find pictures to accompany my poetry that I would love to paint. This one is on my to do list.
Smith  Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 8:49 PM
Beautiful
Lane Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 9:04 PM
Thank you, Alison.
Terry Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:05 PM
The delicate flow and the soft language of this poem kept me reading. Great work!
Lane Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:18 PM
Hi, Angela and thank you very much for such delightful remarks. I truly am grateful for your time spent in reading me
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