Secrets In the Keep

SECRETS IN THE KEEP






Secrets, secrets ------ secrets in the Keep; maidens call them without which they 
  shall meet, of the baron and his bride a solemn meet, sordid secrets, 
  secrets in the Keep 

A wizard's spell, a call of bell and peal, chimes and trumpets 
  the courtyard round, princess-pretty prince and horseback riding;  jumping 
  brushes and endless jumps, then at last confiding ------ 
  the wizard's wicked coniving

Brick and mortar and stone thrice born, eaves of swollen vine above the tower 
  corner, sneaking windows and fingered leafy-ropes reaching out; climbing 
  wooden portals to keep the monarch without ------ the palace walls, the royal 
  halls and pallisade stalls, rolling hills in distances afar 

Trapped, amidst leering buzzards abound, feeding to feed on king and queen, 
  eyes from walls, eyes in the deep ----- dark earth of smitten Keep, Shadow 
  wakened... wakened from sleep

The heart of many sorrow down, unwakened from sleep; rise they may, rise they 
  shall, one by one as they do not slay... never so soon must they stay the hearts 
  of men fast, lucid mind and with heavy task ----- stay the peace, o be it so to 
  everlasting end

Naught is written on but a few of every brow, stay the peace? asks the haggled 
  plea of many soul, wrought to bitter end, unsheathed to war and revolution,
  their solace but a solution for kings this night; one rose above the dreary 
  doom lit light, sheathed aplenty in golden hue, and addressing himself he 
  gave a sting and hello, for he spoke truth to every soul 

Yet the heart be that it may, overwhelmed and possessed to pillage and slay, 
  to teach them and baron ----- the villains from the east, a lesson this day, 
  the king rose up and spoke, calmly and hoped ----- it be not they to decide 
  the fate of kings; offering peace in place of baneful hope

Though always, secrets, secrets ----- secrets in the keep...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/2/2014 9:01:00 AM
Very powerful secrets shhhh not disclosed here, still you kept secrets,Keith. Lol..I really enjoyed your work my dear friend! A 7 for me! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/27/2014 10:26:00 AM
Hmmm those secrets not revealed..Puts the reader in eager to know what baron did behind scenes.I love the messae through tje next lines declaring hope through peace.Sent me in another era,though some things never change .
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:17:00 AM
totally mysterious in mood and content, keith...your words astound!. huggs
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Date: 11/27/2014 7:16:00 AM
Interesting story told..Great idea..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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