Secrets

SECRETS Death took a life and left a soul all alone. No one heard any screams or moans. They couldn't answer the question why?. Who killed that girl,did she have to die. Buried in a fire under all that ash. Her life was taken in a flash. An abandoned bus is where her body was hid. Remains were so small they thought it was a kid. Police couldn't answer the why,when or who. Because of the fire it burnt up so many clues. But when the police finally figure it out. They will be found guilty without a doubt. Her soul was lost but now it's found. Now she can rest and be put in the ground. Teresa Skyles August 21, 2011

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 7/28/2016 7:14:00 PM

So blunt, and sad in this great piece. I'm sorry if this piece is based on a real life event. Always a a tragedy to lose a close one. I understand that writing about a situation sometimes helps to cope. Teresa, feel free to check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Teresa Skyles
Date: 7/28/2016 8:14:00 PM

Thank-you so much for those kind words. Thanks for the invitation to read some of your poems.Teresa

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2016 4:24:00 PM

Such a sad picture you paint with so many unanswered questions Teresa - it must be some sort of closure for relatives when a body is discovered .. until then there is always hope:-( hugs jan xx

Teresa Skyles
Date: 7/27/2016 4:53:00 PM

Thank-you so much for your kind words.They never found out who killed her.She was my friend.Teresa