Secrets

They lurk beneath the surface like sharks
Haunting our souls with phantoms of the past
Binding us together and tearing us apart
They leave their mark on our aura
Some mold us into better people
Others drag us down to depravity
All of them bring together friends on autumn nights
Searching for a new level of understanding
Seeking refuge in an open ear
From demons that have chased us all our lives
Tell me yours and I’ll tell you mine
Shhh…no one else needs to know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 11, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Angelica Grier, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
Sergi Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 5:59 PM
I won't say a word...... Nice work!!
Tsiluma Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 1:12 AM
Beautifully penned Angelica! You've dealt the theme justice - secrets do affect our aura mostly for the bad but sometimes for the good. Very well written!
Thompson Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:15 PM
I like this Angelica. You knew that though!
Grier Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Of course you like it lol. It's about me and you and the convos we have.
Carroll Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:43 PM
Nice write, and I won't tell anyone..lol Ken
Grier Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Thanks Ken I knew I could trust you lol!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Very powerful stuff secrets are. This was so well written! I'm glad I stopped by. I have not read your work before, you have skills.
Grier Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Thank you very much!!! I'm glad you stopped by too!!! :-)
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 12:31 PM
..... my lips are sealed! - Well done Angelica! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
Grier Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Thank you Anne Lise!!! You have a nice weekend as well!!!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:46 AM
A unique poem on secrets! Very nicely pennd! Pls review my latest too.
Grier Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:48 AM
Definitely will do. Thanks for reading.
Tacito Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:33 AM
A bit of strong truth & wisdom. "Bring together friends on autumn nights"...that line made me smile.
Grier Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:48 AM
Hi Drake!!! I'm glad I could make you smile. Thanks for reading.
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