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Secret Serenade

Summer, with such skill has left her print firmly upon my skin once again
   -  a secret serenade is given to a burning fire, with only one desire
          as i anticipate vivid imagery of an earth changing moment
                              
                                      Time holds me 
        
               yet, age still presses forward on this calendar



 
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 Just a little scribble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/10/2020 4:45:00 AM
Lovely poem
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/10/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Robert. This is about me getting another year older. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 9/3/2019 3:43:00 PM
Lovely choice of words makes this speak so vividly of the season gone awaiting season to come Brandy, nice one!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2019 6:57:00 PM
So kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. :) Thank you Gordon. Patiently waiting I am, for the next season to embrace my world. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/30/2019 5:21:00 PM
Yeah, your 'little scribble' speaks with really intense poetic force..concise as it is, this crisp work of 'serenading' imagination refreshed me a huge deal:-) Keep writing, mate!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Hannington for your wonderful comment. Your kind words are appreciated. Such a sweet thing to say. I will keep writing. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 8/27/2019 6:43:00 PM
Hi Brandy, such a wonderful write. Yes, Summer shall soon be at an end and my favourite season, Autumn, shall soon be upon us. Hold the memories of summer for a little while more. I tell you, the older I get, the faster time seems to fly, Love the content. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2019 8:27:00 PM
There are so many moments in each season to caress. Yes, we all have our favorite time of year. :) Thank you Mike for your kind words. It seems time is flying by, just standing still. It's crazy I know, but so true. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 8/27/2019 8:52:00 AM
Wonderful write Brandy.. best wishes..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. Your kind words are always appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 8/25/2019 8:44:00 AM
Charming as always, and beautifully concluded.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/25/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence!! I'm just being me!! Nothing more. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 8/24/2019 9:01:00 PM
I love summer and getting lost in the scents and scenes... autumn may be a beautiful farewell to summer but I’d extend the season if I could... beautiful write :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2019 9:39:00 PM
I completely understand Sandra. To stay in the beauty of Summer, if only for a moment more. I certainly would. Of all the seasons- Spring and Autumn I truly love. Thank you for your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 8/24/2019 4:02:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, B, if I could stop the hands of time I would do so in Summer but to stop time would mean to die. We must press forward on this calendar. Your pen has once again left your heart on the page. All the best my sweet friend. Hugs, John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2019 7:40:00 PM
I never wish for time to stay still, however- a few moments longer would be nice. To linger. Thank you John. This is a reflection of time, seasons and another year of life on this earth. My birth!! I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 8/24/2019 3:56:00 PM
Vivid imagery of an earth changing moment..I would guess that would be worth holding time..You wrote about what dreams are made of..excellent write, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2019 7:36:00 PM
Yes, when leaves change and rearrange their color- it is worth time being still for such a moment. Thank you Vijay! You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/24/2019 3:00:00 PM
- Lovely serenade, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2019 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Anne- Lise. Summer smiles at me! I am waiting for colors in array, as the new season approaches. I could wait a little longer for that special day on the Calendar though. :) Oh well, another year older. I am okay with that. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 8/24/2019 2:02:00 PM
I wrote a poem once called sIlent serenade..vivid imagery with this short personal write..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2019 4:11:00 PM
Seems we all have something in mind, when it comes to serenading. Whether about life or of love. Thank you Silent One. You are appreciated. ~ Brandy
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