Ashley Yates Poet Free verse

Secret Love

Pull me close, don't ever let me go. 
     Share your sweet, soft kisses, 
     Baby make my heart melt. 
     Passion burning like electricity in our eyes, 
     pulse beating wildly with eager expectation.
     Wrapped in a blanket of vanilla and bare skin. 
     Touching,
     Teasing,
     Tasting, 
     sending shivers up and down our spine.
     Breathless and out of breath, 
     become one over and over again. 
     Fire burning between us with soft moans and strong grasps. 
     One last breath as we escape into a concealed love,  
                      Finally released...

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo July 13, 2009 at 4:33 AM A passion filled write and a great one indeed you have a great way of wording things your poem is exelent keep up the great work

Charlene Bird July 6, 2009 at 10:44 AM Beautiful write, there is nothing more spectacular than those moments of passionate love uniting you as one with your love. Well penned. Thank you for the comment on Soulmates, very much appreciated...... Charlene

Jayne Eggins July 5, 2009 at 8:35 PM Beautiful nothing is so inspriational as love ... Love Jayne x x

Matthew Anish July 5, 2009 at 5:29 PM Nice scene - which is what everyone(or almost everyone) desires to have, Sweet words - and thanks for your comments, Ashley Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Hyle Chu July 5, 2009 at 7:59 AM "Wrapped in a blanket of vanilla and bare skin." Descriptive. Your last two lines are a great summary. Very sensual imagery. I am so guilty.

Lord R. E. Taylor July 4, 2009 at 11:01 PM I wish I could find that feeling again...very very good write

Nicole Sharon Brown July 4, 2009 at 10:47 PM Ooooooh! This is hot like fire! I love this one! I agree with all of the other comments I feel the passion.

David Miller July 4, 2009 at 2:31 PM truly captures the romanticism of a moment in passion, well written.

Joseph Spence Sr July 4, 2009 at 1:33 PM Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem regarding 'Love." Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph