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The sun RETREATS to its abode as darkness overrun Our eyes lock and his deep INTELLIGENCE reap sighs KING of my heart bound by eternal love thereof He then approach with a STRENGTH that will smitten 'My PRINCESS' his soothing whisper, 'my heart's only heiress' Sheer pleasure send tremors sighting the GEM i treasure BLESSED was the night on the spread of grass We embrace as a SCHOOL of fish play chase The riverside in the LIGHT was our secret hide © Nadiya (1 Feb '15)

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Date: 2/3/2015 8:22:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write, Nadiya. Good luck on the contest. Eve
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 2/3/2015 6:34:00 AM
the sun is life, but it retreats also brings life through sighs, pleasure,....beauty can be extracted anywhere!
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thank youu Jaafar for the visit and interpreting my write so well... nad!
Date: 2/1/2015 8:34:00 PM
I have no idea about the contest but I absolutely loved this poem Nadya!
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Arthur... pleased that you enjoyed the read... Nads!
Date: 2/1/2015 5:24:00 PM
It is a tough challenge that Vienna has set us - great pen - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:37:00 PM
Yes Jan... not an easy challenge... best to u as well... and thak you very much.

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