Poesy Relish Poet Rhyme

Secret Hide

The sun RETREATS to its abode as darkness overrun

Our eyes lock and his deep INTELLIGENCE reap sighs

KING of my heart bound by eternal love thereof

He then approach with  a STRENGTH that will smitten

'My PRINCESS' his soothing whisper, 'my heart's only heiress'

Sheer pleasure send tremors sighting the GEM i treasure

BLESSED was the night on the spread of grass

We embrace as a SCHOOL of fish play chase

The riverside in the LIGHT was our secret hide

© Nadiya (1 Feb '15)

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Eve Roper February 3, 2015 at 8:22 PM Beautiful romantic write, Nadiya. Good luck on the contest. Eve Poesy Relish March 11, 2015 at 2:44 PM Thank you Eve :)

Jaafar Sadig El Waad February 3, 2015 at 6:34 AM the sun is life, but it retreats also brings life through sighs, pleasure,....beauty can be extracted anywhere! Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 6:56 AM Thank youu Jaafar for the visit and interpreting my write so well... nad!

Arthur Vaso February 1, 2015 at 8:34 PM I have no idea about the contest but I absolutely loved this poem Nadya! Poesy Relish February 1, 2015 at 9:39 PM Thank you Arthur... pleased that you enjoyed the read... Nads!

Jan Allison February 1, 2015 at 5:24 PM It is a tough challenge that Vienna has set us - great pen - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx Poesy Relish February 1, 2015 at 9:37 PM Yes Jan... not an easy challenge... best to u as well... and thak you very much.