Secret Garden

*Secret Garden*

Go back to natural beauty, unwind
Bury and soak into this, I unsigh
Seein' a landscape, large and high
Seasonal flowers, anywhere so wild

Garden hums with life, colors lyin'
Beyond my reaching, my eyes blinded
Ties of scent flowers, let time flies
Fascinated and exotic, much that I cry

Beauty in flowers, awakes my mind
Even briefly, it's significant prize
In one's innermost, all men can find
True nature of being, vigor of mankind

The secret garden, greatest is the mind
There's a sacred place, where true beauty lies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/3/2011 7:30:00 PM
Nice! Great write
Login to Reply
Patanawiroj Avatar
Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 6/6/2011 7:20:00 AM
Thanks very much Ashley.....I love your poems too. There are so many excellent poets here, I am amazed!
Date: 5/28/2011 9:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u share your creative poetry luv..
Login to Reply
Patanawiroj Avatar
Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 5/29/2011 4:18:00 AM
Thanks Linda-marie, I view yours, and they are fantastic too. Will follow up your works more.....Have a good day!
Date: 5/28/2011 1:11:00 PM
Nice expression quite creative ... the secret garden, greatest is the mind.. enjoyed it, Busaba
Login to Reply
Patanawiroj Avatar
Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 5/29/2011 4:19:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram, I think your work is so brilliant....you are very keen, with much talent, and so kind!
Date: 5/28/2011 7:43:00 AM
A beautiful poem, I just love it and welcome to poetrysoup~~
Login to Reply
Patanawiroj Avatar
Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 5/28/2011 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so much....excited to be on board. I also viewed your piece and post a comment this evening......please have a look!
Date: 5/28/2011 1:28:00 AM
very nice poem thank you
Login to Reply
Patanawiroj Avatar
Busaba Patanawiroj
Date: 5/28/2011 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Duncan....I like your very lovely poem too. Shall send you more comments after I finish them. Take care!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter