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I can't seem to describe how I feel when you feel down all I know is all I wanna do is turn your day around and though to me much of your past remains a mystery the fact is you past's your past, its only history and I think it's funny, the strong feelings that I have for you where I'd do anything I can to help you when your feeling blue I wish I had made more of myself, my life, throughout the years Wish I could be your knight in shining armor sent to wipe away all of your tears I wish I had the means and the ability to show you, everyday, how beautiful you are to me and though I know you might not feel the same way I have a feeling, my feeling's here to stay Maybe someday, if you're not already scooped up I'll bring you a coffee, we can sit and talk and have a cup and maybe I'll get, that first and final chance to ask that gorgeous girl to dance but if that never happens, you can add it as a pipe dream and I'll still be here for you no matter how far I seem and I'll just keep hoping you find what you deserve and until you ask me for it, my judgment I'll reserve

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Date: 5/31/2014 11:50:00 AM
This is very good. I enjoyed it a lot. Those opening lines are killer in my opinion.
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Date: 5/30/2014 7:13:00 PM
What do you have to lose..tell her how you feel...use your words...they are more powerful than you know.
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Date: 5/30/2014 4:41:00 PM
'Tis a lucky girl that is granted your admiration. You have a great heart and great words, I hope you know how unique you are :-)
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Date: 5/30/2014 9:19:00 AM
My friend, this is a truly wonderful write! I once felt exactly that way about a fine and gentle lady but Alas , fate gave her heart to another. Bravo on the write!!!!!!!!
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