Secret

Blade of hair, across her face Cutting her dimples crosswise, A hint of a smile; hiding The secret of love

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Vrushani Thaker

Date: 7/3/2010 5:45:00 AM

Wow!!!!!!!!!! What a write!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!!!!!!! Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Nitesh. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/3/2010 4:29:00 AM

Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are great.! love Leke

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/2/2010 5:18:00 AM

You told her story with just a few lines... Love it :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2010 6:21:00 PM

Congrats on the first cut in the contest, Nitesh

Date: 5/31/2010 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Anonymous Norman

Date: 5/31/2010 11:18:00 AM

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/28/2010 9:27:00 PM

Nitesh, Just enough said to draw the reader in - Great job -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2010 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nitesh. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/24/2010 12:57:00 PM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Date: 5/23/2010 4:36:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/23/2010 3:18:00 PM

Well written poem. Very descriptive with just a few lines. Enjoyed it. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Caroline.