Secret

Blade of hair, across her face
Cutting her dimples crosswise,
A hint of a smile; hiding
The secret of love

lovedodoitsu

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Vrushani Thaker

July 3, 2010 at 5:45 AM

Wow!!!!!!!!!! What a write!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!!!!!!! Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 3, 2010 at 8:16 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Nitesh. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

June 3, 2010 at 4:29 AM

Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are great.! love Leke

Wilma Neels

June 2, 2010 at 5:18 AM

You told her story with just a few lines... Love it :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 31, 2010 at 6:21 PM

Congrats on the first cut in the contest, Nitesh

May 31, 2010 at 1:53 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Anonymous Norman

May 31, 2010 at 11:18 AM

Michael Jordan

May 28, 2010 at 9:27 PM

Nitesh, Just enough said to draw the reader in - Great job -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 25, 2010 at 5:40 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nitesh. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

May 24, 2010 at 12:57 PM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

May 23, 2010 at 4:36 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen