Second Hand Man

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She packed her bags one day
Left me in the dark
Running away, what a lark
I stare at the walls; life seems so bleak and stark

I wrote her love letters
Only a thousand or two
The poor old postman
Carrying them all back to my door

Return to sender was the obvious score
So I took my pen and wrote a few more
Before dousing my desires
In the illusions of folklore

Where out of the forest
On a mist filled dawn
Returned my princess
Singing our song

Alas I walk along lonely forest paths
I dream and ponder of what might have been
I look up to the heavens and demand, what was my sin?
That I am alone, surrounded in deathly silence

A second hand man

Waiting

For a second hand rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/25/2015 7:52:00 PM
Arthur I'm intruged by this write, you've completely taken me to another place and time, to a mystical enchanting place full of illusions I'm captivated by this story of yours, she seems real but is not, love your pic it adds to the mystery of this poem perfectly, a magnificent work here my fine fellow, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/31/2015 10:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Cherl!! Hugs
Date: 1/20/2015 12:45:00 AM
Beatiful lines and a perfect title... thank you for the read and coments on my poems... really encouraging...#7 nad!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/24/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thank you! :) :)
Date: 1/18/2015 9:45:00 PM
The perfect image for your love story Arthur. Great write and love the "Second Hand Man" title too! :) Ana
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/24/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Ana!!!
Date: 1/18/2015 2:44:00 PM
Beautiful poem you have composed my dear friend. Blessings eve 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/24/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Eve! :)
Date: 1/17/2015 6:43:00 PM
Dropping by with a hi!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/17/2015 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Richard, working on the next masterpiece! :)
Date: 1/17/2015 8:09:00 AM
Excellently written...but very sad. It's never advisable to give up hope, but I think it's time to move on...you can easily become a first hand man again! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/16/2015 4:22:00 AM
:) as always Buddy Art beautiful in a sad way... Hope you are doing okei... :) God bless you'- olive eloisa
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Date: 1/15/2015 6:10:00 PM
You had me from the title! Poor second Hand Man! I enjoyed this story Arthur.
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Date: 1/15/2015 7:51:00 AM
oh a sorrowful song of sadness. I feel your true emotion in every word. I know what you mean when you write and you write with such passion and beauty for that one and true love. And he doesn't even know or appreciate those heartfelt words.
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Meg Anderson
Date: 1/24/2015 6:04:00 PM
I looked back at my comment and had to laugh. I meant to say I feel the same as you. When I write my poems I write of my true heart ache and of my love or my anger for being treated like I am by the guy I am with. He doesn't understand my poetry and appreciate where I am coming from. Sorry if that was confusing. Lol
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Meg Anderson
Date: 1/24/2015 3:44:00 PM
Lol. I was referring to myself when I wrote he.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/24/2015 11:11:00 AM
I sure hope you meant "she" LOL
Date: 1/15/2015 3:43:00 AM
We have to Probe into the depths of the soul for answers to find my friend, Arthur! A beautiful and profound poem!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/24/2015 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios
Date: 1/14/2015 2:47:00 AM
Hope the rose blooms for you one day my friend - so beautifully penned - am most concerned about the postman though Arthur - watch out for a compensation claim any day now! a 7 from me great image and imagery:-) Hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/24/2015 11:07:00 AM
Yes I was thinking the same! LOL Darn unions
Date: 1/13/2015 11:20:00 PM
I love the pic my friend but I think you need a haircut.... Great tragic poem my friend...your princess will come one day....cheers
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