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Second Fiddle

She was playing second fiddle Caught in a three way love affair Sometime love becomes a riddle She was playing second fiddle She found herself in the middle In this game of hearts all is fair She was playing second fiddle Caught in a three way love affair

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/24/2024 10:51:00 AM

When ' love becomes a riddle ' is way, it's definitely because of ' the second fiddle. ' Need to keep certain emotions of the heart under control. So well written and presented. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/22/2024 10:31:00 AM

A great toilet with a threesome love affair. Careful though. Trouble may easily loom. But I'm sure we assume this is just a poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/22/2024 2:03:00 AM

Thats so sad but so true, ive seen so many of such situationships. I must highlight and praise your ability to write on so many various themes and subjects! I really loved this! And felt the depth of this especially “ Sometime love becomes a riddle She was playing second fiddle” hits so strong! And is so very moving! Brilliant triolet. Fave

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/21/2024 7:11:00 PM

A terrific poem that captured the triolet style. I liked the love triangle theme.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/21/2024 5:36:00 PM

This is like a steamy soap opera lol. More please. I don’t know how to write this form so kudos to you!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/21/2024 4:19:00 PM

sounds complicated but your 3-way love affair was the perfect topic for your Triolet. Well done, sir. Have a pleasant evening, Sara