Second Chance In Love

Second Chance In Love

Candlelight fluttered
Romance ended forever 
Broking the amorous vows

Destinies took paths
Plowed with the indifference
Sowed with deep buried hatred

Starting a new tale
Risking a broken heart love
"Unfearing abandonment"




Ninth Place 
For Any Poem Written In July 2016
Sponsored by Laura Loo
7-18-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Nayda, I guess I wasn't surprised when I saw your name on the winners list! I always make sure you know how I feel about your poems. You are so great at these short ones! "unfearing abandonment"...wow...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
Deremer Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:30 PM
I really enjoyed your poem.
Negron Flores Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:42 AM
Thank you Pam
Haight Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Nayda, your poem is lovely and the love story flows wonderfully within your Choka form. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Negron Flores Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Thank you Sandra
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