Tim B Poet Lanterne

Secluded Cabins

Wind
Blown In
Tears flow free
Suffocating
Fear

Bleeds
Erie 
Scream dampened
Shh darling, quiet now,
Rest

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For Nette's Contest: TURN ON THE LANTERNE
By: Tim B.

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Lori Lucas Mcclure September 9, 2011 at 8:16 AM Congratulations on your win! ----Lori

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2011 at 7:25 AM A scary one for the scene that was painted..Sara Sara Kendrick September 10, 2011 at 10:16 AM Congrats on your win with this fantastic work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 10:48 PM very eerie one if I am interpreting it right!! Congrats on your big win!!

Joyce Johnson September 8, 2011 at 9:15 PM Congratulations on coming in first in this contest. Well done. Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta September 8, 2011 at 5:06 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Tim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 8, 2011 at 3:55 PM Congrats Tim on first place win with this awesome Lanterne luv..

Kash Poet September 8, 2011 at 1:06 PM Excellent write!Congrats on your 1st place win Tim!

Bob Quigley September 8, 2011 at 10:39 AM Great write. Congratulations Tim

Nette Onclaud September 8, 2011 at 8:37 AM tim, congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2011 at 8:05 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn OnThe Lanterne" contest Tim. Love, Carol

David Williams September 8, 2011 at 4:46 AM hey Tim congrats on your big win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2011 at 8:51 AM Wishing you the best in the contest Tim. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey September 6, 2011 at 8:46 PM Great Lanternes Tim! Both are magnificent writes!! Good luck in the contest!!