Sebastian the Red Crab

I met a red crab named Sebastian,
Nice and funny one

Then he gave me flowers a sign of friendship
He says I look likes Ariel the princess of the Atlantic a
Eric you must be let you be my prince that’s what I say

Dance with me and he took my hand
Echo of drums sounds in a deep blue sea
Even Ursula the sea witch dance with us
Princess Ariel got surprised, oh! What is happening?

Sebastian what is all this about? I’m the princess and you haven’t invited me?
Ehh... Princess, meet my friend she’s pretty as like you
Ariel Princess of the sea looks at me, saying “I want to trade my tail for your feet”.



In the Deep Sea Contest (Gautami Phookan)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/10/2012 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Cheryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:23:00 PM
this is so charming. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 4/6/2012 3:05:00 AM
Will have to watch this again it has been a long time, congratulations Cheryl xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:43:00 AM
congrats Cheryl on a fantastic win for an excellent entry luv.. happy easter blessings too ..
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Date: 4/5/2012 4:08:00 PM
A very cool poem indeed!! Enjoyed thoroughly this superbly crafted work... Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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Date: 3/22/2012 4:24:00 AM
Cheryl, thank you for reading my 'boracay' wanted to send you letter through soup mail but i think for premium members only, lol!! I'm here in Iloilo, so by going to boracay it takes 4-6hrs drive. It's faster if you take the plane from Manila to Catiklan...Nice poem for the contest...God bless^_^
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:32:00 AM
Good morning ;-) cheryl good luck in contest nice twist at the end , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
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