Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Seaweed Monster

In the inner most 
Deepest depths, 
you tortured me 
until there was no beauty left 

A vile monster 
with lying tongues 
In my ocean deep 
You became slimy 

You attacked me 
without a heart 
Hurting me 
In the depths 

Creeping like seaweed 
all around me 
Covering your lies 
Disguised as truth, 
leaving a horrible stench 
In my ocean 

Piece by piece 
In tearing through the crack 
Reaching for the light of truth 
Barely able 
To breathe 

You will not drown me 
With your loveless heart 
The tide is turning 
You no longer smell sweet 
I see a monster 

Buried deep 
You left your scar 
Your vile treatment 
In the stench of hurt 

Looking to the heaven's 
I bled for you 
you chose 
To put me in hell

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Paul Callus October 28, 2014 at 2:17 PM (Found it straight away!) This is very powerful, Liam. This is also scary, but not in the same way that mine is...it is the human behaviour that's scary in this case. Glad you managed to move on my friend. // paul Liam Mcdaid October 28, 2014 at 2:45 PM paul this one nearly destroyed me during a cancer scare smiling but i have forgiven since each precious memory is what shines in the end life is to short i see pal reading back graphic emotions oh i have so many dark ones like this one not even posted they almost scare me i wrote a prayer of hope that time now being published on a prayer book

Teddy Kimathi October 17, 2014 at 9:21 AM I applaud you for your great write Liam! :-) Liam Mcdaid October 17, 2014 at 9:28 AM smiling teddy you want to read the cheese monster lol wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful truly appreciated

Maurice Yvonne October 14, 2014 at 11:38 PM Great touching write Liam congratulations. Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 11:57 PM thank you kindly maurice heartfelt dear friend deeply appreciated pal

Brenda Meier-Hans October 14, 2014 at 10:31 PM It's so sad what people do to each other. Congratulations on your win Liam. Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 10:36 PM yeah brenda and they call it love looking through loves eyes one sees hate wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Dr.Ram Mehta October 14, 2014 at 9:55 PM Dark and deep expressions, liam, congrats on the win Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 10:16 PM thank you ram truly wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt appreciated

Pandita Sietesantos October 14, 2014 at 8:36 PM Liam, I am so sorry you experienced this kind of pain! But this excellent write was a great way to unburden yourself of the grief. Congratulations on a wonderful, well-deserved win! Pandita Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 8:44 PM pandita thank you deeply light is the only way forward dear friend smiling heartfelt beautiful comment bless you truly appreciated

Jan Allison October 14, 2014 at 12:20 PM Very deep and dark Liam many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 1:02 PM this jan was wrote in great darkness enveloped in a pit of pain the lady of nine years dirty phone calls her with another man i had to get the police involved in the end she scared me thank you dear friend bless you i smiled long time since i read this one

Shane Cogan August 25, 2013 at 3:52 PM Deep, dark and powerful words. Hope the pain has eased. Liam Mcdaid August 25, 2013 at 4:53 PM oh thank you in the sense of darkness yeah only now when the truth surfaced I was used in my writing you will see how thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Shanity Rain August 25, 2013 at 3:43 PM very deep , reminds me of that floating monster known in Ireland ! Liam Mcdaid August 25, 2013 at 4:55 PM ha ha that's were I found it ha ha wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you ever so much

Charmaine Chircop August 24, 2013 at 3:26 PM So deep is this poem..When love turns sour..how deeply it hurts..making us utter and act ins way we nevdr believed we would..It sounds like a painful rejection..Very emotional Liam Mcdaid August 24, 2013 at 3:33 PM THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED