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Seattle Spring

gray sky yawning
into never-ending
clouds that drench
the deep green ground

(vertical haiku)

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Andrea Dietrich

April 5, 2011 at 10:32 PM

by the way, those guys you commented to, just click on their names and say stuff to them at one of their poems or they will probably never know you commented back to them. i did the same as you when I first came to soup! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

April 5, 2011 at 10:31 PM

wow, what an image. I used to live near Seattle as a child. I did not like it at all because I need the sun, but I sure love this haiku!

Renee Kelly

April 5, 2011 at 3:13 PM

Thanks Drake, James, and Dr. Ram Mehta! It has been pretty much non-stop rain here in Seattle and I'm feeling it (over 30 days with no sun!).

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 5, 2011 at 10:02 AM

keen and cute observation on spring with good images, Renee

James Foulk

April 5, 2011 at 9:06 AM

loved this creative haiku, i know some people in Seattle, they use to go to my church and they left denver in 1987. thank you for reading my little girl grown and for your comment and thank you she did have a great birthday.