Seating Arrangement

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*Image of Toilet Issue by Pixabay. Seating Arrangement Notice Ladies and Gentlemen: Please place the toilet seat down when you're done, Thank You, The Management. "Don't forget boys," said Evelyn. The boys expressed their agreement and routinely bid their consent, "After you ladies," they stated, but the girls sounded their dissent. "Truly fair, reasoned we dated yet some proof's appreciated, so go on guys and indulge us, and both will place as best rated." First and then the other -- no fuss. Guys smile at girl's thumbs-up, A+. "Oh my gosh, where are the tampons!" "Get some, there's nothing to discuss!" "We'll be back!" "Who picked this place -- moms?" They yelled, "Got some!" Piercing caroms after they agreed to relish the rest of the night at the proms! 2022 June 04 *1st Place* Rubaiyat Contest ~~Sotto Poet: Judged 2022 June 13 HMS: 8 syllables per x 20 lines RZ: RhymeScheme; a,a,b,a - b,b,c,b - c,c,d,c - d,d,e,d - e,e,f,e.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/14/2022 6:21:00 PM

First verse I like the best! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2022 6:36:00 PM

Great, Kim, your presence is welcoming my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2022 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Fun/Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2022 10:27:00 AM

Bless you, Paula, you've made this day great my friend, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2022 12:03:00 AM

William, Big Congratulations on your fantastic first place win! Blessings and Aloha, Connie

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2022 1:17:00 AM

Mahalo nui, Connie, I'm truly grateful for your enlightenment my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2022 7:18:00 PM

Very interesting poetic work. Enough fun too. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2022 8:45:00 PM

I appreciate you, Christuraj, and your caring courtesies my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2022 4:04:00 PM

Heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding submission in my contest, William. Blessings my buddy

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2022 8:43:00 PM

A hearty thanks, Lasaad, as I had fun doing this particular piece, as well as, the fine placement my friend, Aloha~William