Seasons Serene

Fairies and Angels charm the environment still and calm,
Flowers and scenes of the season enhance the abode charm;
Weather wakes vivacious cold-hot, chill-warm, wet-dry feeling,
And shapes the Christmas season into thousand bells pealing...

Snow in cold regions, like spiders, weaves thick white blanket-webs,
Sun, forbidden, tries to peep like snail, from shell of snow-ebbs;
Fog in grey-white gown like tribal bride dreamily marching,
Clouds, randomly rolling, like melting snow-balls, soul-searching...

Fragrance of innocently smiling snow-burdened flowers,
Tender chill drizzling of heavenly divine-grace showers;
Bluish-grey, gray-white, reddish-orange disco-light stray-rays,
As though falling from Milky-way, to show humans new ways...

Though seasons seem docile as dead resting in deep dark graves,
Spring follows winter; summer the spring, breaking all closed caves...


23 December 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/24/2021 9:17:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, I am enraptured with the alluring enchanting quality of your vivid imagery that takes me to the center of this serene scene and simply takes my breath away.. Every poetic lines shines with gem- light luster. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/30/2021 5:34:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/23/2021 10:21:00 PM
You have brought in all changes of the season into your beautiful poem ! I love the image of snow, like spiders, weaving white blanket webs . Many telling images in the poem!
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Date: 12/24/2021 7:14:00 AM
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Date: 12/23/2021 7:11:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, such a magical description of the changing of seasons and expressions of optimism - "Spring follows winter; summer the spring". You have painted a glorious picture of the serenity of Christmas season. Love all your poems - this one is a fave. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 12/23/2021 8:12:00 AM
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