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Seasons of Me

Spring still knows me Out, about and carefree, Wandering a flower bed Nurturing the blooms ahead Summer does not see Very much of me, Hiding behind the shades Until the heat fades Autumn knows me well Standing where leaves fell, Kicking them all around Wherever I am found Winter, too, will see Little more of me, Crunching on icy flakes A million smiles makes.

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Date: 2/26/2024 7:06:00 AM
Kelly - what I really find quite delightful about this is the gentle personification and the lovely description in poetic rhyme (always my favourite). It is sweet and clean. A beautiful testament to the natural seasons of the human heart. (fav)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2024 11:12:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words and the fav... I appreciate it very much, Sam :)
Date: 2/22/2024 4:11:00 AM
Unique and creative take on the seasons. I love how youv written “ autumn knows me well” “ winter too will see” has a very poetic touch to your well rhymed and articulated lines! Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/6/2024 6:17:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one... Thank you for the kind words, as always :)
Date: 2/21/2024 3:14:00 PM
You’ve entered your seasons! Congratulations, Kelly!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/28/2024 4:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim :)
Date: 2/21/2024 11:31:00 AM
Ah Kelly this is so creative, it looks like your seasons and mine know each other very well, :) I am faving it congrats
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/19/2024 4:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vie ... Your kind words just made my day :)
Date: 2/21/2024 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. This also sounds like me. Have a blessed day.............
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/18/2024 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Paula ... I appreciate it :)
Date: 2/21/2024 7:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kelly :) - A ovely poem :) - hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/14/2024 5:03:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Anne-Lise ... I appreciate it ... Hugs :)
Date: 2/21/2024 5:24:00 AM
I LOVED THIS! It was cute rhyming and put me in it's mood. It's simplicity made it more enjoyable by not taking up most of my day with useless word salads. And I traveled with it and spoke it to myself. Good job!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/13/2024 6:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words... Glad you enjoyed this one :)
Date: 2/20/2024 9:02:00 PM
What a clever way to do seasons. Love it. Congrats
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/10/2024 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Andrea :)
Date: 2/20/2024 2:53:00 PM
Very nicely penned Kelly, Congrats on your win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/9/2024 6:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph... I really enjoyed the challenge :)
Date: 2/18/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hey Kelly you did this one really well and you made it rhyme nicely..
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/8/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One... I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 2/17/2024 3:10:00 PM
That's a lilting poem of seasons and it brings to mind how hot summer can be. I'm in agreement.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/25/2024 4:57:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Hilda... Summer is my least favorite season, but I do enjoy it's cool night breezes, fireflies and thunderstorms :)
Date: 2/17/2024 1:45:00 PM
Dearest Kelly, Your poem dances beautifully through the year! Each verse captures your unique connection to a season. Spring's carefree spirit blooming with your touch, retreating from summer's heat, chasing autumn leaves, and finding joy in winter's crunch—you paint a heartfelt portrait of nature's embrace. Loved it! - Daniel
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/24/2024 6:27:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem. I appreciate it, Daniel :)

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