Kelly Deschler Poet Rhyme

Seasons of Me

Spring still knows me
Out, about and carefree,
Wandering a flower bed
Nurturing the blooms ahead 

Summer does not see
Very much of me,
Hiding behind the shades
Until the heat fades

Autumn knows me well
Standing where leaves fell,
Kicking them all around 
Wherever I am found

Winter, too, will see
Little more of me,
Crunching on icy flakes
A million smiles makes.

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Sam Scott February 26, 2024 at 7:06 AM Kelly - what I really find quite delightful about this is the gentle personification and the lovely description in poetic rhyme (always my favourite). It is sweet and clean. A beautiful testament to the natural seasons of the human heart. (fav) Kelly Deschler April 14, 2024 at 11:12 AM Thank you for the kind words and the fav... I appreciate it very much, Sam :)

Ink Empress February 22, 2024 at 4:11 AM Unique and creative take on the seasons. I love how youv written “ autumn knows me well” “ winter too will see” has a very poetic touch to your well rhymed and articulated lines! Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your well deserved win Kelly Deschler April 6, 2024 at 6:17 PM Glad you enjoyed this one... Thank you for the kind words, as always :)

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2024 at 3:14 PM You’ve entered your seasons! Congratulations, Kelly! Kelly Deschler March 28, 2024 at 4:59 PM Thank you very much, Kim :)

Mystic Rose Rose February 21, 2024 at 11:31 AM Ah Kelly this is so creative, it looks like your seasons and mine know each other very well, :) I am faving it congrats Kelly Deschler March 19, 2024 at 4:53 PM Thank you so much, Vie ... Your kind words just made my day :)

Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 8:24 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. This also sounds like me. Have a blessed day............. Kelly Deschler March 18, 2024 at 5:12 PM Thank you for the kind words, Paula ... I appreciate it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2024 at 7:34 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kelly :) - A ovely poem :) - hugs Kelly Deschler March 14, 2024 at 5:03 PM Thank you for the kind words, Anne-Lise ... I appreciate it ... Hugs :)

The Situation February 21, 2024 at 5:24 AM I LOVED THIS! It was cute rhyming and put me in it's mood. It's simplicity made it more enjoyable by not taking up most of my day with useless word salads. And I traveled with it and spoke it to myself. Good job! Kelly Deschler March 13, 2024 at 6:25 PM Thank you so much for the kind words... Glad you enjoyed this one :)

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2024 at 9:02 PM What a clever way to do seasons. Love it. Congrats Kelly Deschler March 10, 2024 at 6:07 PM Thank you for the kind words, Andrea :)

Joseph May February 20, 2024 at 2:53 PM Very nicely penned Kelly, Congrats on your win Kelly Deschler March 9, 2024 at 6:49 PM Thank you so much, Joseph... I really enjoyed the challenge :)

Silent One February 18, 2024 at 11:11 AM Hey Kelly you did this one really well and you made it rhyme nicely.. Kelly Deschler March 8, 2024 at 10:33 AM Thank you, Silent One... I appreciate your kind words :)

Hilda Greenhough February 17, 2024 at 3:10 PM That's a lilting poem of seasons and it brings to mind how hot summer can be. I'm in agreement. Kelly Deschler February 25, 2024 at 4:57 PM Thank you for the kind words, Hilda... Summer is my least favorite season, but I do enjoy it's cool night breezes, fireflies and thunderstorms :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 17, 2024 at 1:45 PM Dearest Kelly, Your poem dances beautifully through the year! Each verse captures your unique connection to a season. Spring's carefree spirit blooming with your touch, retreating from summer's heat, chasing autumn leaves, and finding joy in winter's crunch—you paint a heartfelt portrait of nature's embrace. Loved it! - Daniel Kelly Deschler February 24, 2024 at 6:27 PM Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem. I appreciate it, Daniel :)