Seasons of Love

Although for you with all my heart I loved,
now my forever burning shaming pain,
my heart an unexpected dagger shoved,
stunted minds confusion, waves of disdain.
Long Winter nights, sheltered you with my warm,
joyous moments of Spring, truly embraced,
Summers of heat and shine, our loves platform,
Autumn abrupt fall from seasons, now faced.
Togetherness a shoot for us adorned,
blooming sprouts developing as promised,
all blossoms thistles abound, never warned,
my love and care given never sufficed.

Separate paths, inevitable now,
my child’s tears but her happiness I vow.

11/22/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/10/2016 3:12:00 PM
Oh, Mark, so heartfelt and sad, but so beautifully written and expressed in your lovely Sonnet. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/12/2016 12:49:00 AM
Thank you for taking your time to read Sandra, Special day for you! Regards, Mark
Date: 11/26/2016 7:28:00 PM
Mark, very good write and very heartfelt, congratulations on your win. Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 11/29/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Eve for my placement - I appreciate your contests and the challenge, Mark
Date: 11/25/2016 7:07:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 11/29/2016 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Jan - I appreciate your reading and comments Mark
Date: 11/22/2016 3:19:00 AM
A beautiful but emotional sonnet.I guess there are many who can relate to your lines after the break up of a relationship. I especially love the third stanza with the portrayal of the seasons to your relationship:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2016 3:25:00 AM
Thank you Jan - and thanks for the advise and inspiration you always give. Mark
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