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Seasons of a Fruitful Tree

I love my little corner of the yard when nearby Lilac Bush perfumes the air. The human dwellers treat me with regard. They sit behind their house and simply stare. They gaze on me while I am in the pink and blooms on me are streaked with white and rose. They sometimes deeply breathe my scent; I think they like me best when I’m in fancy clothes. In time, their small ones stay around all day and swing from ropes strung from my strongest arm. I’m glad to serve my young friends in their play. But later, I bring forth my greatest charm. My ovaries expand and overlap. . . . . My luscious fruit gets plucked, and then I nap! Feb 17, 2021 for the 'Open Poetry 2' Contest of Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 5/5/2021 4:36:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Date: 3/18/2021 10:33:00 AM
i like the different angle in this, andrea, nice personification of the tree - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/18/2021 1:23:00 PM
I really appreciate that coming from you, Charlotte. I love your free verse so much.
Date: 3/17/2021 9:57:00 PM
A real beauty Andrea. You know how much regard I have for trees. This should rate high my friend. I love this gem. I hope you enjoyed St. Patrick’s Day! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:04:00 PM
Love your personification. Excellent, and enjoyed reading Andrea...
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Date: 2/21/2021 12:07:00 PM
Andrea, Such a lovely poem to find today. Lifted Sunday spirits; perfection in Personification. So captivating your nature's timepiece. Persimmons, apples, chestnuts, cherries; a pantry that provides to all. Still picturing a tree in a nap. -Richard
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Date: 2/19/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hello Andrea … a tree responds to love and tender care and so rewards us - another fine limerick Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 2/18/2021 1:06:00 AM
some flowers are beautiful, some have a beautiful scent but are poison, life is learning that, nice poem.
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Date: 2/17/2021 11:46:00 PM
Oh my... your intelligence just SPARKS... loved this personification in Sonnet form Andrea. Great thought process and continuity from one line to another. Last two stanzas my fav. Am faving this poem. Best wishes. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/17/2021 11:06:00 PM
I am still curious about which flower this is. Could be Pink. They are quite prolific I believe. ~~
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:36:00 PM
You are a marvelous lilac for sure!
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Date: 2/17/2021 12:07:00 PM
Your blossoming tree speaks eloquently in this personification. All the best, Andrea.
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Date: 2/17/2021 11:04:00 AM
Wonderful personification Andrea. You are truly gifted poet. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/17/2021 10:55:00 AM
Well written personification Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:49:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, You do the personification form very well. By giving whatever you are life, causing it to seem human. The tree was no exception. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:43:00 AM
Oh, so lovely dear Andrea!!A joy to read.. A FAVE!!!
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