Seasons Numbered

There bloomed a field of flowers wild
across a meadow bare
fallen seeds from ravens beak
there traveled free of fare

Heavens tears washed their bed
then covered a blanket spun of sun
giving life to such fragile flowers 
yet to life the winters come

Thin and sheer those sheets like glass
a pretentious lens on the past
much like innocence and a human soul
like ice they crack and adapt

Seasons ever change
and beauty washes away
Tis the artistry within the wild
the knowing it will never be the same

Oh yes, one day, they'll live again
they will seem even stronger than before
finding their moments bathed in tears
but their days in the sun no guarantor 

Cruel winters shall never cease to come
vanishing colors first vibrant
just like the soul exponentially broken
ebbs it's  passion and soon becomes silent

One must color the path they see
one must see the hues of their dreams
for the fare is no longer free of charge
nor the number of seasons we'll see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/16/2014 10:56:00 PM
You write such haunting, aching poetry, Sarai. I wish the road of life would sometimes flow downhill or even stay level for a while. I recall climbing what they called fourteeners in Colorado. In the alpine heights above tree line, spring comes late, but there I'd find about to bloom the flowers I'd have never seen, if I'd given up below.
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Date: 10/27/2014 4:57:00 AM
Sarai, This is MAGNIFICENT! Straight into my fav's.#7
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Date: 10/15/2014 8:24:00 AM
It is uncanny. I just posted Princess, and though the theme is different, the season and feel of the story is similar. (maybe it's just me, lol) But yours is just so eloquent. I love it.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/19/2014 1:53:00 AM
Princess is a stunning piece my friend :-)
Date: 10/14/2014 6:50:00 AM
outstanding piece of writing golden pen sari
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/19/2014 1:54:00 AM
Thank you my dear Liam
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