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Seasons greetings

The're out
      the're out
Spring
announces with
         a shout-
Yellow
          yellow
     everywhere
look
         look
left or right
here,there
           anywhere-
under trees
            nodding
         in the breeze
braving
      March wind chill
narcissus
             amaryllis
       or
        if you
                 will
daffodil

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/14/2012 10:20:00 PM
I like the way you did this, Brian. It made it look Spring-like, if that makes any sense. I truly enjoyed this piece. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:50:00 PM
Brian this is a lovely poem, I enjoyed every thrilling moment reading about Spring and the beautiful daffodils.
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:31:00 PM
VERY nice, Brian. I am guessing all three of the last words mean daffodil. I like the formatting here too. It makes it look like a flower swaying in the breeze. Nice and colorful.
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:43:00 PM
I love daffodils they have to be one on my favorite flowers Brian..such a lovely flowery poem.. its my fav one today xx
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:06:00 PM
This reminded me of Donovan's hit song "Mellow Yellow". Good write.
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