Brian Strand Poet Verse

Seasons Greetings

The're out
      the're out
Spring
announces with
         a shout-
Yellow
          yellow
     everywhere
look
         look
left or right
here,there
           anywhere-
under trees
            nodding
         in the breeze
braving
      March wind chill
narcissus
             amaryllis
       or
        if you
                 will
daffodil

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Suzanne Delaney March 5, 2020 at 10:27 AM Lovely poem Brian: I am ready for Spring.SuZ Brian Strand March 5, 2020 at 12:42 PM Me too Suzanne

Kim Merryman March 14, 2012 at 10:20 PM I like the way you did this, Brian. It made it look Spring-like, if that makes any sense. I truly enjoyed this piece. Love, Kim

Shirley Long March 14, 2012 at 7:50 PM Brian this is a lovely poem, I enjoyed every thrilling moment reading about Spring and the beautiful daffodils.

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2012 at 7:31 PM VERY nice, Brian. I am guessing all three of the last words mean daffodil. I like the formatting here too. It makes it look like a flower swaying in the breeze. Nice and colorful.

Tracy Edwards March 14, 2012 at 6:43 PM I love daffodils they have to be one on my favorite flowers Brian..such a lovely flowery poem.. its my fav one today xx

Robert Pettit March 14, 2012 at 6:06 PM This reminded me of Donovan's hit song "Mellow Yellow". Good write.