Seasons

Sunbeams streaming down 
         Earth, weeds and flowers basking
              Smiling happily


       Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated

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Connie Marcum Wong

January 30, 2018 at 1:35 PM

I agree with Kim. I have witnessed the yellow sea of dandelions spread out over the Bavarian hillside. It is breathtaking! I loved your haiku Carlos. : )

Lunita Blanca

January 30, 2018 at 8:35 PM

Nature have many things to show us when our senses become sharper. Thank you dear friend.

Kim Rodrigues

January 30, 2018 at 8:47 AM

A pretty picture! Even dandelions have glory!

Lunita Blanca

January 30, 2018 at 11:54 AM

If it were not for weeds, what will we do in our gardens?

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

January 29, 2018 at 6:34 PM

weeds are very strong, they're survivors, growing in places where the terrain can be harsh. Sometimes their flowers can be extremely colourful, sometimes beautiful - they just need to shine their face to the light.

Lunita Blanca

January 30, 2018 at 8:19 AM

Weeds like love, are everywhere.

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