Seasons

with winter upon
and fall left to far behind
bringing spring summer

seasonshaiku

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James Fraser

February 1, 2011 at 3:00 PM

Roll on Spring and Summer, both seasons bring the smiles back to our faces....:)

Joe Maverick

January 31, 2011 at 8:08 AM

brig it on! good one Robert.

Robert Shreve

January 31, 2011 at 6:42 AM

thanks for the great feedback

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2011 at 10:02 PM

Nice one, Robert! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 30, 2011 at 7:07 PM

Good haiku with nice images, Robert

Poet Destroyer A

January 30, 2011 at 5:44 PM

good write on seasons in this haiku, enjoyed,..p.d.

Ryan Nash

January 30, 2011 at 5:02 PM

I've never had a real talent for the haiku, but I've always found it cool. The last line stands out: "bringing spring summer." The words flow together, yet their sounds are kind of "bouncy"/springy. No pun intended...