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seasons

with winter upon and fall left to far behind bringing spring summer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/1/2011 3:00:00 PM
Roll on Spring and Summer, both seasons bring the smiles back to our faces....:)
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:08:00 AM
brig it on! good one Robert.
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:42:00 AM
thanks for the great feedback
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:02:00 PM
Nice one, Robert! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2011 7:07:00 PM
Good haiku with nice images, Robert
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Date: 1/30/2011 5:44:00 PM
good write on seasons in this haiku, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/30/2011 5:02:00 PM
I've never had a real talent for the haiku, but I've always found it cool. The last line stands out: "bringing spring summer." The words flow together, yet their sounds are kind of "bouncy"/springy. No pun intended...
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Date: 1/30/2011 5:01:00 PM
Good one..We are all about ready for the next season..Sara
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