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Seasons

Seasons The nights seem longer, testament, To summer’s toil, her seeds are spent The blue moon grants us one more chance, To thank the earth for sustenance And dreams of winter’s thoughtful peace, Beside the fire’s warm release Of memories gained and stacked like wood, Beside the hearth where hearts have stood ‘till spring again, when waters free, To bless the earth from sea to sea 09/04/10 8:16 am

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Date: 9/14/2010 7:26:00 PM
Very, very, very nice. I love it!!!
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Date: 9/11/2010 6:36:00 PM
Jimmy, may I say, how terrible mature your work's become ... I did not think this possible with perfection ... you have here another song that will be sung when we are gone ... it is an immortal
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Date: 9/4/2010 8:19:00 AM
A nice creative write on the seasons, James
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:32:00 AM
Beautiful write James, so tranquil and relaxing.. Enjoy your Saturday :)
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Date: 9/4/2010 6:56:00 AM
Very lovely and stirring ~I really enjoyed reading it..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/4/2010 6:55:00 AM
James, wonderful way to express the sounds of change. A beautiful and new moon awaits the stillness of the cold nights to come. Much soon after I wait for the new flowers to bloom, with the nourishment of what will flow once there is no more snow. Enjoyed the wonderful sounds & images of nature and her season change,..p.d.
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Date: 9/4/2010 6:24:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your couplets about the soon coming of winter...I especially like the third set of couplets...Sara
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Date: 9/4/2010 6:21:00 AM
Great couplet you have written and shared today.. Michael
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