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Sunlight going down dead leaves scattered all around life at sixty-nine

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2019 12:16:00 AM

You are in great company, Allen. I will be 67 the last day of May! Sweet haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2019 2:52:00 PM

oh my, a metaphorical haiku and sadly, it's kind of that way, I am discovering!!!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/7/2019 3:34:00 PM

Yes Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2019 2:45:00 PM

A haiku which somehow keeps pointing at me, Allen :) But I have long decided to stop counting! Regards // paul

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/7/2019 2:46:00 PM

Wise decision Paul

Farrah Veronica Sinha

Date: 4/7/2019 12:30:00 AM

Very nicely penned...life at 69...it depends on how you see life at that age though..the sun could be going down...or rising...scattered leaves...all the things you have or haven't done...perhaps?

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/7/2019 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Farrah for your insight on this matter. You make a great point

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2019 11:41:00 PM

Nicely penned, Allen , the tree 69 or you :)

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2019 9:14:00 AM

your a year older than I

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/6/2019 11:44:00 PM

Me Eve. And thank you