Notes About The Poem

Every once in a while I encourage my husband to collaborate with me to create a poem. I gave him the prompt "what if tomorrow never comes"... Considering he is struggling with cancer, I'm sure I will always treasure this poem.

Seasoned Yesterdays

Facing west not to miss a sunset
I close my eyes imbibing its warmth
And listen to the symphony of nature
Soaking in its every beat

I kissed my wife goodnight
Expressed how much I truly love her
What if tomorrow never comes



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~RANDOM MUSINGS VOL.3~ 2020

AP: 3rd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Radice Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Poignant and quite brilliant.
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, Gary.
Somadas Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:07 PM
Let him compose beautiful poems like this.. and the nature will cure him for sure as she need to hear more of them..
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 12:59 AM
What a delightful comment. Thank you so much, Jenish.
Ligon Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 10:38 PM
This is so precious that you collaborated with your husband, especially considering the circumstances. Prayers for you both.
Gauthier Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 6:35 AM
Thank you so much, Juliet. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Wise advice indeed. Kisses goodnight are vastly important.
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 10:33 PM
Thanks, Caren.
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