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plucked from frozen hills

evergreen scents fill our homes...

     lights flicker with joy




*Entry for Andrea's "Haiku Me a Christmas Tree" contest

Copyright © Carolyn Devonshire | Year Posted 2010

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Quoth Theraven Date: 10/31/2019 9:49:00 AM Carolyn, Such wonderful people them. What became of them I wonder. Like Carol Sunshine? -Richard Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/19/2010 1:23:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 12/17/2010 4:28:00 PM great win!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/13/2010 11:41:00 PM fascinating, andrea!! CHEERS to the joyous award for this contest.. great job! hugggs, nette Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/13/2010 3:04:00 PM Beautiful light..Congratulations..Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/9/2010 2:27:00 PM one of the best parts of the season the smell of pine in a home! Light & Love Login to Reply

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Date: 12/9/2010 2:24:00 PM A terrific and well deserved 3rd.place win.thanks for sharing Carolyn.I'm from Oklahoma.~LUV~Teresa Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/6/2010 12:15:00 PM "Haiku Me a Christmas TreeCongratulations on your win in Andrea's " contest Carolyn. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 12/5/2010 9:24:00 PM Heartiest congrats for this super success. Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 12/5/2010 11:02:00 AM Many congrats Carolyn for picking up 3rd spot in the winners list with this beautiful entry in Andrea's contest. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 12/5/2010 10:13:00 AM My congratulations on your awesme win in the contest, Carolyn! Beautifu! Love, Audrey Login to Reply

Andrew Crisci Date: 12/5/2010 9:46:00 AM Congratulations on your big win in Andrea's " Haiku Me a Christmas Tree". Even Nature's scents can fill our homes with joy as you state in your excellent Haiku. Be proud of your achievement and may your inspirational pen never stop flowing. Have a blessed day. Peace and Love, Andrew. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/5/2010 8:53:00 AM Excellent Haiku Carolyn, Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/5/2010 6:58:00 AM A sure winner.. congrats,carolun! nette Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/5/2010 5:15:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/5/2010 4:55:00 AM Congrats on your win with this gem!!!!! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/4/2010 10:44:00 PM Carolyn, congratulations on your awesome win in Andrea's contest with this joyful write of yours.. Enjoy your Sunday ;-) love Wilma Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/4/2010 5:14:00 PM I loved the way you had the tree plucked from frozen hills and then the change in the last line to it joyful with lights in a warm house. And the scents added to the whole picture. Congrats on your third place! Login to Reply

Gerard Keogh Jr. Date: 12/2/2010 2:57:00 PM This is really quite good with its plaintive description and its last line. You did well here! Regards from Gerard Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 12/1/2010 6:29:00 AM A delightful Christmas Haiku !! Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 11/30/2010 7:18:00 PM It’s a Gem you have created here. The pleasing scent of Pine branch definitely brings not only the Christmas tree, but pleasures and memories of this great festival also. The pleasures of this lovely time perhaps cannot be imagined without this lovely smell, which is flowing in your lovely poem my friend. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra....Carolyn Devonshire Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/30/2010 3:00:00 PM There's something special about a Christmas Tree in the corner of the living room all lit up. Lovely Haiku Carolyn, and good luck in Andrea's contest >> James Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 11/30/2010 10:23:00 AM Your Haiku brings nice imagery which sheds ideal light to your point, Carolyn! Check your blog, I started a limerick contest in your comment section. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 11/29/2010 11:03:00 PM i love love love it. 'lights flicker with joy'my favorite line. Login to Reply

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 11/29/2010 10:24:00 PM Great Haiku! Loved how you brought in the christmas pine scents, among with that prickly touch whilst watching the candles warmly in our homes, opposed with the frozen countryside... Bravo so much in very few words! Seasons greetings to one and all! Login to Reply

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