Seasonal Beauty

The cold shroud of snow,
Melting...icy wilderness:
Unveiled by the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 5, 2010 at 9:02 AM
These last puckle of Haiku & Senyru have been quite exceptional Raul, in this form you are an inspiration, no doubt about it >> James
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January 30, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Lovely intense Haiku Raul... the cold sroud of snow is upon New Jersey tonight with 6 inches of new snow falling... thankxxx for sharing this wonderful write and for everything else that has transpired... so appreciate... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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January 30, 2010 at 4:48 PM
Unveiled by the sun......Oh what a nice way to describe the melting snow.....love it! ~ Carrie
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January 30, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Lovely haiku, Raul. It can be read on a spiritual level as well as on the surface message pertaining to nature. Very nice! Love, carolyn
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