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We had been welcomed with an exquisite embrace. With sentences that stream the same as a wave. The sky-blue vault is shaded in smooth grace. A glimpse of the sea, to stroll to and from the cave. We'd gladly cross the solid and subtle field. In innate oneness, we are complete; We didn't have to talk as we appear to wield. Until we were ousted by an outer beat. From pretty places to revolting symbolism. Where such discussions and gatherings happen. On a day, the typical scene is momentum. He is a ruthless normal hero or a demon. The aura glimmered brightly near. In a desert area, you'll have a sun clear.
Written: September 6, 2021

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Date: 9/7/2021 1:01:00 PM
Nearly imprisoned in the beauty of the cave. The thought of escape at a stranger’s heartbeat.
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Date: 9/7/2021 1:20:00 AM
A wonderful sonnet. Lovely picture. Wein Malta had such a scene but corrosion spoilt it all.
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Date: 9/6/2021 11:19:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful sonnet... Beautifully written...
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Date: 9/6/2021 4:02:00 PM
Well written Lasaad. I hope all is well :)
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Date: 9/6/2021 11:20:00 AM
Exquisite lines that drew me into the spirit of your sonnet. You seem to have a certain rubric to your writing that I covet. A wonderful vocabulary put to its best use.
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Date: 9/6/2021 10:57:00 AM
Hello Tayeb, a beautiful scene with your poetry. I love the first verse. it makes me feel like i am there. Caves and water go together. Enjoy your day my friend.
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