L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Season of Rebirth

We must not rebuke the winds conspiring
Together in early spring to bring us mirth 
The songs of trembling leaves inspiring
We must not rebuke the winds conspiring
The oaks and sycamores rapidly attiring
Reminding us spring is the season of rebirth
We must not rebuke the winds conspiring
Together in early spring to bring us mirth. 

written April 25, 2022

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Bill Baker April 30, 2022 at 2:55 PM I like this way of looking at the working of mother nature. Well written! Bill L Milton Hankins April 30, 2022 at 3:05 PM Thank you, Bill, for your thoughtful insight.

Harry Horsman April 25, 2022 at 10:44 PM The poetry is superb, Milt, so visual, I like the form you chose here. L Milton Hankins April 26, 2022 at 7:26 AM Thanks so much, harry. I really enjoy writing triolets.

Caren Krutsinger April 25, 2022 at 9:14 PM This poem has conspired to be inspiring and it succeeds. L Milton Hankins April 26, 2022 at 7:26 AM Thanks, Caren. I enjoy writing triolets.

Marco Chies April 25, 2022 at 5:41 PM Spring really is the most beautiful of the seasons and it certainly brings a feeling of rebirth. L Milton Hankins April 25, 2022 at 7:24 PM Indeed, it does, and I think it also restores our sense of mirth from the dark and gloomy days of winter. Thanks, Marco.