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Seaside Fun

Sun
Excites
After lunch
Swimming with friends
In
Deep
Entraps
Floundering
Under water
Numb


Written 17th March 2019
Contest:  Light up the Page 3
Sponsor:  Joseph May
4th place

beachdeepseasummerlanterne

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Line Gauthier

April 1, 2019 at 10:34 PM

Congrats on your win, Ann.

Ann Gilmour

April 2, 2019 at 2:09 AM

Many thanks for your welcome congrats Line with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 27, 2019 at 1:59 PM

- Congratulations on a great win, Ann :) -

Ann Gilmour

March 27, 2019 at 2:27 PM

Many thanks Anne-Lise for your lovely congratulations, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

March 26, 2019 at 8:59 PM

Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Ann Gilmour

March 27, 2019 at 2:25 PM

Thank you so much Eve for your congratulations and sweet hugs, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joseph May

March 26, 2019 at 8:00 PM

A fun day at the beach..Congrats on your win Ann

Ann Gilmour

March 26, 2019 at 8:07 PM

Many thanks Joseph for my win in your contest. I love the challenge of your contests and thank you for sponsoring them. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2019 at 5:52 PM

back again with congrats. I really enjoy the sponsor's lanterne challenges.

Ann Gilmour

March 26, 2019 at 6:07 PM

Thank you so much Andrea and I too enjoy the lanterne challenges. So good to see you back my dear. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

John Castellenas

March 20, 2019 at 5:50 PM

Amazing use of words. Made me see the sea.

Ann Gilmour

March 20, 2019 at 6:03 PM

Many thanks John and so pleased you are able to see the sea too. Nice to meet you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

March 18, 2019 at 2:35 PM

Great one, Ann, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Ann Gilmour

March 18, 2019 at 4:11 PM

Thank you so much Eve, kindest thoughts Ann xx

M. L. Kiser

March 18, 2019 at 10:46 AM

I've always loved the sea; wonderful poem.

Ann Gilmour

March 18, 2019 at 2:23 PM

I adore the sea and being a Piscean I am very lucky to live beside it. Many thanks for your lovely comment ML. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Arturo Michael

March 18, 2019 at 4:36 AM

Complete satisfaction...everything's in order...I enjoy those moments myself...

Ann Gilmour

March 18, 2019 at 6:24 AM

Many thanks for your visit Arturo, I always appreciate your comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 7:53 PM

I enjoyed this one because seaside is one of the BEST ways to enjoy time!

Ann Gilmour

March 17, 2019 at 7:58 PM

Oh yes it is absolutely the best place to be and I am so lucky to live right beside it! Glad you enjoyed it Andrea. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

March 17, 2019 at 7:48 PM

You have lit up the page, making me want summer, Ann.

Ann Gilmour

March 17, 2019 at 7:54 PM

At the moment I would settle for spring, although today was sunny and bright, which really lifted my spirit and brought joy to my heart as I walked by the sea thinking of my love. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:00 PM

seaside fun for sure Ann!hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

March 17, 2019 at 6:36 PM

Many thanks Jan, and at last the lovely sunshine here today enabled me to stroll along the prom and enjoy the seaside, such a treat after a week of gales. Hope your Sunday was good too. Kindest thoughts Ann xx