Seaside Fun

Sun
Excites
After lunch
Swimming with friends
In
Deep
Entraps
Floundering
Under water
Numb


Written 17th March 2019
Contest:  Light up the Page 3
Sponsor:  Joseph May
4th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/1/2019 10:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/2/2019 2:09:00 AM
Many thanks for your welcome congrats Line with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/27/2019 1:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great win, Ann :) -
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/27/2019 2:27:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise for your lovely congratulations, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2019 8:59:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve for your congratulations and sweet hugs, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2019 8:00:00 PM
A fun day at the beach..Congrats on your win Ann
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/26/2019 8:07:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph for my win in your contest. I love the challenge of your contests and thank you for sponsoring them. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2019 5:52:00 PM
back again with congrats. I really enjoy the sponsor's lanterne challenges.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/26/2019 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea and I too enjoy the lanterne challenges. So good to see you back my dear. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/20/2019 5:50:00 PM
Amazing use of words. Made me see the sea.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/20/2019 6:03:00 PM
Many thanks John and so pleased you are able to see the sea too. Nice to meet you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/18/2019 2:35:00 PM
Great one, Ann, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/18/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/18/2019 10:46:00 AM
I've always loved the sea; wonderful poem.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/18/2019 2:23:00 PM
I adore the sea and being a Piscean I am very lucky to live beside it. Many thanks for your lovely comment ML. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/18/2019 4:36:00 AM
Complete satisfaction...everything's in order...I enjoy those moments myself...
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/18/2019 6:24:00 AM
Many thanks for your visit Arturo, I always appreciate your comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/17/2019 7:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this one because seaside is one of the BEST ways to enjoy time!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/17/2019 7:58:00 PM
Oh yes it is absolutely the best place to be and I am so lucky to live right beside it! Glad you enjoyed it Andrea. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/17/2019 7:48:00 PM
You have lit up the page, making me want summer, Ann.
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:54:00 PM
At the moment I would settle for spring, although today was sunny and bright, which really lifted my spirit and brought joy to my heart as I walked by the sea thinking of my love. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/17/2019 6:00:00 PM
seaside fun for sure Ann!hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/17/2019 6:36:00 PM
Many thanks Jan, and at last the lovely sunshine here today enabled me to stroll along the prom and enjoy the seaside, such a treat after a week of gales. Hope your Sunday was good too. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/17/2019 5:05:00 PM
Ann, this is great and very creative, never thought to combine the words, a winner to me ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/17/2019 5:46:00 PM
Wow, thank you Dear Heart for your great comments, and I really hope that Joseph agrees! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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