Seaside

scientific fact
    when you have just been paddling
    your feet feel happy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 2:13 PM
I love this. Is it for Harry's contest?
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Yep, I would have to agree.
Inman Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:43 AM
...but ,oh, the envy my chest and shoulders feel.
Godwin Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Oh, they do, they do - how clever are you! A joy, Viv. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Hooray for rested feet - cute and witty, Viv.
Murray Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Reading this makes my face happy Viv.
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 7:03 AM
I feel happy knowing this:-) hugs Jan xx
Waters Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:01 AM
indeed they do!
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