Seashore Madness

This place is mine especially in the spring.
Distressed and stranding my soul in guilt.
Sometimes as I sit here, I hear the bells ring.
Of the schooner, my lover of the sea built.
He sailed away many times before that night.
I awaited each return with eager, endearing love.
Each time I saw his lady of the sea, sweet delight.
Thanking the glorious power in the Heavens above.
Until that one fateful night of a storm of such rage,
Took my lover and his lady of the sea, down under,
Jealousy devours my soul now, as seen upon this page.
For his lady of the sea I ponder, placed with his plunder.
She took my lover from me and here I sit in sadness.
She now has my lover forever, and I only madness.




Woman at Seashore - French painting - 1850/1950 - Metropolitan Museum of Art

http://worldvisitguide.com/salle/MS04172.html

Words my muse gave me while viewing this painting.
written for contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 1:31 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian
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March 21, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Interesting perspective of the art. Creative title. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 8:50 AM
I can feel the woman's longing in this well written ekphrasis, Cecil. You also paint the image very sharply. I have not seen the painting itself, but your work makes me feel like I have. It also compels me to write about my favorite paintings. Beautifully and hauntingly written! (I also just found you on Classmates. No photo??)
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 7:28 AM
This is wonderful, Cecil. A lovely take on this beatiful painting! Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Beautiful painting! A sad and tormenting poetic story of lost love. So excellent! You are on a roll today! Good luck! Love, Shar
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