Seashells - the Japanese Hotan Style
~Seashells~
(Hotan)
Seashells are pretty
They are very colorful
Can be found at the seashore
By the sea
Walking by the beach
There, they show
For our very eyes
As waves lapping come and go,
With the ebb and flow.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010
June.01.2016
~Author's Notes:
The "Hotan", is a Japanese style, being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).
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