Seascape

Escape Away from here To the sea of Your grace To assuage my fatigue in Seascape. Watching An ocean calm Just for a while, breathing Salty sea, its moisture a balm Healing. Restores forlorn spirits Hearts that couldn't give more With the distant song of whales to Their love. Escape To meet You here In the peace of this place That restores my spirit, freed in Seascape. By CarolineCecile copyright © 02.13.10

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David Byrne

Date: 4/7/2010 11:00:00 PM

Very nice and you used one of my favourite words 'forlorn'!

Edward Ford

Date: 2/20/2010 10:36:00 PM

You have a distinct way to soothe my longing with your sugar coated poetic experssions, not trying to play up but the more I read the more I want and I will eventually go through your entire catalog and thanks again, =) Sang P.S. tomorrow is a rest day so you can expect more critiques on your amazing scripting luv, bye bye for now

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 11:57:00 AM

great poem, escape sounds nice

Marty Owens

Date: 2/13/2010 7:59:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem....I love to go to my dad's place at Cherry Grove Beach SC and go out and sit on the beach....Thanks for your write...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 12:18:00 PM

A beautiful exquiste poem from the inspiration of the Seascapes contest posted today.. such beautiful words flowing .. the sea is an escape ..that's why I am such a "beach baby"... lovely lines Caroline .. luv.. Linda-Marie..