Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

Seascape

Escape
Away from here
To the sea of Your grace
To assuage my fatigue in
Seascape.

Watching
An ocean calm
Just for a while, breathing
Salty sea, its moisture a balm
Healing.

Restores
forlorn spirits
Hearts that couldn't give more
With the distant song of whales to
Their love.

Escape
To meet You here
In the peace of this place
That restores my spirit, freed in
Seascape.

By CarolineCecile
copyright © 02.13.10

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David Byrne April 7, 2010 at 11:00 PM Very nice and you used one of my favourite words 'forlorn'!

Edward Ford February 20, 2010 at 10:36 PM You have a distinct way to soothe my longing with your sugar coated poetic experssions, not trying to play up but the more I read the more I want and I will eventually go through your entire catalog and thanks again, =) Sang P.S. tomorrow is a rest day so you can expect more critiques on your amazing scripting luv, bye bye for now

Doris Culverhouse February 14, 2010 at 11:57 AM great poem, escape sounds nice

Marty Owens February 13, 2010 at 7:59 PM This is a wonderful poem....I love to go to my dad's place at Cherry Grove Beach SC and go out and sit on the beach....Thanks for your write...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 13, 2010 at 12:18 PM A beautiful exquiste poem from the inspiration of the Seascapes contest posted today.. such beautiful words flowing .. the sea is an escape ..that's why I am such a "beach baby"... lovely lines Caroline .. luv.. Linda-Marie..