Paula Goldsmith Poet Cinquain

Sears Tm

Great store,                                                                                               
I grew up with.                                                                                                                    The smell of roasting nuts.                                                                                                   The toy aisles that went on for miles.                                                                                 Closing. 

 

Date Written: 12/13/2020

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Trademark~~Quintain
Contest Judged:12/31/2020 6:25:00 AM
Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick December 31, 2020 at 9:32 AM Oh!! I remember the Sears stores that carried the roasting nuts and the sesame sticks. Sad that they went the way of some stores with their closing. Thanks for participating in my contest. Sara Paula Goldsmith December 31, 2020 at 12:05 PM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. I enjoyed going back to the old memories for this write. It was an honor to have a win and be in your contest. Yes, so very sad many of the old stores have/are closing. Today, have joy/blessings.................

Joanna Daniel December 17, 2020 at 10:12 PM Really sad that all good stores have to close, Paula, well written:) Paula Goldsmith December 18, 2020 at 10:34 AM Thanks for writing. Glad you like it. Yes, so very sad. Merry Christmas with blessings..................

Andrea Dietrich December 16, 2020 at 3:54 PM it's sad to see them all going away. Did you have Woolworths? I think that one is out now too. One day there will be only Amazon and we will won't even have a reason to go out anymore and dress up anyway. So why are we ordering clothes and jewelry?? Paula Goldsmith December 18, 2020 at 10:33 AM Thanks for writing. The dollar stores took over what the five and dimes stores were. You are so right, "it's sad to see them all going away." Your questions, "So why are we ordering clothes and jewelry??" That is a very good one. Maybe, out of habit???? Merry Christmas with blessings..................

Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2020 at 9:19 AM Childhood memories are the best, its sad how everything ends sooner or later, everything except our fond memories, those stay on forever, Merry Christmas dear friend xo Paula Goldsmith December 16, 2020 at 9:43 AM Thanks for your note. You are so right when you say, "everything ends sooner or later, everything except our fond memories, those stay on forever." In the end, memories are all we have. Merry Christmas with blessings..................