Searching Myself

I'm looking for myself Who am 'I' "I am the 'I' or Just say the name of the 'I' I have no or non-existent Said bin existence of 'I' I'm looking for myself Who am 'I' "I am the 'I' or Just say the name of the 'I' "I'm in where the 'I' OU lost the 'I' Was lost or not 'I' I had a dream or a toy 'I' Key moves the bin and Adapts to the way your boss I'm looking for myself Who am 'I' "I am the 'I' or Just say the name of the 'I' Its meant to be I did not yet know Their survival I still did not recognize Who wanted a warm Still have not found The search of his existence Today again I do cry I'm looking for myself Who am 'I' "I am the 'I' or Just say the name of the 'I'

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Abdiel Rios

Date: 10/20/2016 1:45:00 PM

This is relatable keep it up

Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 3:41:00 AM

Whatever that means, way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Lakshmi. :)

Lakshmi Jayswal Agarwal
Date: 9/28/2016 3:53:00 AM

Please feel free to contact me on meghamyself@gmail.com

Lakshmi Jayswal Agarwal
Date: 9/28/2016 3:51:00 AM

Thanks for your encouragement dear moon flower.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2016 1:45:00 PM

?????????????? LAKSHIM, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lakshmi Jayswal Agarwal
Date: 9/28/2016 3:54:00 AM

Thank you so much for your appreciation

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2016 9:40:00 PM

Great title, LJA ?????????, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Lakshmi Jayswal Agarwal
Date: 9/28/2016 3:56:00 AM

Thanks SKAT A.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/19/2016 5:13:00 AM

So many questions ... so many answers ... Do fill in ... Let there be flowers ... for yourself ... and for others who will look with obvious pleasure ...

Lakshmi Jayswal Agarwal
Date: 9/28/2016 3:57:00 AM

Thank you so much sir for your valuable guidance.