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Searching For Others

I trek through this desert of life now Doing all I can that is right now Unable to see through the darkness In search of the eternal light now By being nothing more than a man Conjuring every ounce of might now Hoping to find others on their way I will keep them within my sight now Continuing throughout all my days Trying to win this life long fight now Searching for Others Contest: Take The Leap By Debbie Guzzi 10-10-13

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2013 2:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Way to go..Sara

Skat A

Date: 11/15/2013 11:06:00 AM

Dan, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/13/2013 12:20:00 PM

Lovely ghazal, Dan, very tightly metered, congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/12/2013 3:00:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Dan

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/11/2013 7:50:00 PM

you handled this form very nicely... good poem...congrats on your win :)

Allan Koven

Date: 10/25/2013 5:26:00 PM

Gosh sounds a bit like my poem "Swimming Upstream". Guess I am not alone in the Soup.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/17/2013 10:29:00 PM

This is a good poem Danny. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem..... Lucilla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2013 8:51:00 AM

Interesting work..I like the flow to it..Sara

Christine Phillips

Date: 10/12/2013 4:12:00 AM

Is this age game catching on? yes... many people spend their youthful days doing irrelevant and dangerous things. This poem serves as a good reminder for everyone to value every moment of their days. Treat other with love, respect and compassion... time waits on no man. Conscious words and I hope that you find what you are looking for.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2013 8:22:00 PM

Glad I caught up to you Dan you don't need 10! BIG HUGS, 5 is a nice number some do go to 15 but wowser that's a lot. Line 2 is either 'the' light or 'thy' light YOU got the hang of it = work on line 5 [shhh star trek?] So glad you are entering the contest. Light & Love

Cindy Lu

Date: 10/11/2013 1:00:00 PM

OMG! Again our poetry do twain... LOL, we seem to be on the same track lately. Loved your poem because I can relate to it today! Love Ya Danno! Cindy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/11/2013 12:48:00 AM

Very positive way of thinking, Dan

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 10/11/2013 12:35:00 AM

Helo deary bro Dan.. just stop by to say my HELO..hoping everything is well..a very nice poem... congratulation for the contest :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2013 4:54:00 PM

To trek through the desert of life..that s very profound Dan..In darkness others will definitely be of comfort and together we can reach light..I just love these thoughts penned.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2013 12:58:00 PM

- Good luck on your searching and in the contest, Dan. - Very well written!! - oxox f.e.f. // Anne-Lise :)